Shizuku's Intervention

[Shizuku]

Name: Tenrai Shunpo (Divine Flash Step)

Race: Shinigami

Power Level: Shikai. Bankai

Effect: By concentrating reishi, User can move 1.5 times as fast than a regular Shunpo.

Drawbacks: By overusing it User ages much faster than usual. (if used in more than 10 posts a topic)


Name: Tenrai Arashi Shunpo (Divine Tempest Flash Steps)

Race: Shinigami

Power Level: Bankai

Effect: By concentrating Reishi, and any concentrated form of Light, User can move 2 times faster than a regular shunpo

Drawbacks: If used too many times in succession, User's Body will eventually crumble and be reduced to ash. (if used in more than 3 posts a topic)

Name: Blade Storm (Ken Arashi)

Race: Shinigami

Power Level: Bankai

Effect: By using Shunpo in conjunction, with Zanpakuto's Hurricane Creation Ability. Shizuku can step around an opponent in a circle creating a hurricane controlled by her blade. The walls of the hurricane are the two crescent moons on her blade moving at a high speed. After 3 minutes (one post) the storm explodes in a burst of energy similar to the Crescent Slash.

Drawbacks: The ability requires immense concentration and if it is lost for one moment the explosion will hit Shizuku instead.

[Monty2289]

This only has a few wording problems. Shizuku'nee if you weren't officially declared my nee-chan I could kiss you. Considering your app has the least trouble

Considering that the limits of your Flash Step isn't beyond Shunko (Flash Cry) I don't see any reason to have drawbacks. You just have a distinictly faster ability to increase your number of flash steps preformed in one setting.

You can get rid of the ability involving Shunpo. It's just the standard ability of any and all capable Shinigami. As Captain if I couldn't use it I'd fail. Because its a simple version Hoho that can be grasped within minutes to hours.

The wording of it having to do with your zanpakuto is not needed. If you stress that then this would be an ability that is based off of your zanpakuto and it would therefore be a result of your zanpakuto's ability. (NOT YOURS)

Any comparison outside of stats are not to be used. Anything like..."the speed of sound". What is the speed of sound in this RP. It can't be measured and it needs a number. Like when using it your speed stat is probably the only affected and its raised by a certain amount (NO MORE THAN 2.0)

Just change those few things and add a clause for useage per posts (How many posts can these abilities be used until a cool down period starts)

[Shizuku]

I fixed it ANIKI! Super flash step to 1.5x and Mega Flash Step to 2x.

[Monty2289]

Thank you for the changes sis. Those numbers are just applied to your speed stat when you initiate them so that's fine. Your base stat doesn't change. Approved

[Monty2289]

I didn't know you had added it to your ability list rather than making a seperate app. It's very managable and understandable in its function.

Approved

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