Kusa

[Brenden]

Name: Kusa(grass)

Type: Zanpaktou
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Details

Affinity/Theme: nature/grass

Spirit Appearance (Zanpaktou only): teenage girl, green hair and eyes,green t-shirt and jeans no strange features

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General Abilities: none

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Unreleased Form

Description: regular blade, small oval-like guard, green hilt with kanji for kusa in the middle with gold lines(not paint) going in

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Shikai (Second Form)

Release Command:Spread across the plains

Description: zenbonzakura-ish, becomes grass

Abilities: What is your Shikai's special abilities

Ability 1: kusatoku(grass shield):creates cacoon of grass around giving body

Ability 2: kusaken(grass sword/blade):makes all grass as sharp as blades

Ability 3: kusa kasei(grass growth):can grow grass anywhere

[ssj3gohan007]

Approved!

[Brenden]

I thought I should add bankai so here it is

Bankai (Final form): kusa zetsu(grass reed)(might be noted as zetsu)(reeds are hollow grass)

Description: same as shikai, becomes reeds

Abilities: What is your Bankai's special abilities

Ability 1: same as shikai(see main topic)(add on reeds)

Ability 2: genzetsu(illusion reed): creates illusion through sound

[ssj3gohan007]

Approved!

[Monty2289]

Okay if no one's not going to question it I will.

absorbtion-can absorb an enemy into the blade if the attack would kill them instently
What does that even mean? You have to word your abilities better. What attack would kill who instantly. (You just said "if the attack would kill them")

Also the absorbtion effect. Is there some wavelength of energy or function that does the absorbtion. If it can catch any and every opponent into its blade then that godmodding. I suppose if you don't specify that. Then when people RP with you they are just going to say stuff like: "I shunpo'd out of the way" and you'd get into an arguement about it being able to do a successful absorbtion without fail.

Eh...This is not really a complaint or anything, but what exactly makes you a powerful vizard if all your blade is good for is healing unless of course you are used as supplement vizard and you aid in battle. So you can't really hurt anyone. Here's the thing though. If you are used for that purpose then that would be godmodding because any time your comrade is hurt or dying you can immerse them into your blade and they come out 100%.

The third ability is not an ability because subsequently its expected that you can released people healed. (Otherwise what would be the point in healing them other than just to trap them)

I liked the overall idea because a healing zanpakuto is unique. You just need to explain how your sword does the absorption. Because it would suck to just be in an RP with you and you trigger your shikai and then say "Haha, Absorption and your enemy is trapped...no exceptions." The same with healing comrades. Surely it has a conditionary effect for useage and not everyone can be completely healed.

This is the main reason I made a full-offensive zanpakuto based on an in-series similar source with only one main ability only (Just with techniques that allows for variation)

By the way no one use Unohana as example of a Soul Reaper who only use healing methods because she's actually capable of hurting things and people with Minazuki's Shikai.

[Brenden]

Ill respond 1 paragraph at a time

I mean if it was a different blade it would kill them but if I slice heir arm off and they bled to death nothing would happen

I guess I could have it send reishi into the person and bring their reishi into the blade

if I have reishi waves it could take awhile to do it and could get attacked

Yeah.

they can use their reishi(if stronge enough) and I guess I have to wait a couple posts to be completely healed

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[Brenden]

Ill respond 1 paragraph at a time

I mean if it was a different blade it would kill them but if I slice heir arm off and they bled to death nothing would happen

I guess I could have it send reishi into the person and bring their reishi into the blade

if I have reishi waves it could take awhile to do it and could get attacked

Yeah.

they can use their reishi(if stronge enough) and I guess I have to wait a couple posts to be completely healed

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[Monty2289]

Why did you double post?

In any case and yeah you shouldn't designate reiatsu as reishi waves. Its call reiatsu .

So if you mean that it draws on what ever level of reiatsu is near it and with your own spiritual pressure you absorb people in. With that in mind. All you have to do is have a level of power strong enough to resist it. Thanks for clearing that up

And that first sentence made no sense. "mean if it was a different blade it would kill them but if I slice heir arm off and they bled to death nothing would happen"

You have to phrase your sentences better in an RP otherwise people won't understand you. And if I caught what you mean. You didn't specify that your blade has anything to do with cutting to use its effect. So if you cut someone with your blade they would definitely bleed to death. Of course your blade won't have enough strength to do anything to anyone at the Captain level or higher without its effect.

[Brenden]

i didnt mean to double post

to absorb it needs to be in a body it just killed and I have no control over that

i didnt know about the name reitsu

[Monty2289]

Well that just means your not familar with Bleach. I mean you could have even called it Spiritual Pressure

Spiritual Pressure and Reiatsu is the same thing

Reishi or Reishin are physically present constructs of reiatsu. In other words. If it doesn't come from a person's body then its reishin. It includes the entire make up of Rukongai and the Soul Society.

[Brenden]

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